Week 8 Comments and Feedback

I've gotten a lot of feedback from fellow students and I think I have been able to writing even better stories thanks to the comments I've gotten. I don't think the comments I have made have been as helpful to the students as I've gotten but I do try to leave good comments on their stories. I think I've gotten to know the people who's introductions to themselves relatively well and I hope other students have been able to get to know me a bit better from my own introduction. I can't think of anything to get more helpful comments from students they have already been very helpful. I myself will try to leave better more detailed comments on other students comments.

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